This is noob stuff
Your review is very frank but altogether useless. The emotion wasn't as good as it could have been leaving the reader with a numb emptiness. I would suggest applying more figurative language and checking punctuation for a more appreciative stance from other users on this web address. Altogether I would sadly have to say your comment isn't very good and resides with a current rating of 0 on my charts. Thanks for trying better luck next time.
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